iRubric: 6 Traits Rubric

My paper doesn't focus on one topic or subject. (My ideas do not relate to each other.)
Ideas are unclear and not well developed

Ideas are not fully explained or developed

I can write about one topic or subject but my ideas are not specific enough to support this topic or subject.

Ideas show depth and are supported by evidence

I can write a paper which holds the readers' attention. I can write ideas which focus on one topic or subject and I can give several examples to support these ideas.

My writing doesn't reflect a personal connection. (I do not relate to topic) My writing doesn't involve the reader/audience.
No similes, metaphors or personification

I can write a paper that makes a sincere attempt to engage the reader/audience. (The result is pleasant) But my effort is not interesting/ compelling.

Most similes, metaphors, and personifications are original and appropriate

I can write a paper that speaks directly to the reader/audience. (I can write a paper that is interesting, compelling, and engaging.)
Words create memorable pictures and descriptions or arguments for understanding

My simple sentences are choppy and the reader/audience can not follow my ideas with fluency. My sentence structure has repetitive patterns
Poor sentence structure with repetitive patterns
Run-on sentences

Uses simple sentences
Repetitive sentences with an occasional variance...often too flowery or trite
Some sentences should be corrected or divided for flow and impact

My sentences are longer but all the same length, reader/audience still can not read my piece with fluency. (My writing needs more rhythm.)
Sentence patterns are varied but sometimes seem forced or inappropriate

All sentences contain complete thoughts
No run-on sentences
Uses complex sentences

I can write a paper with a good rhythm. Sentences are well built, strong; with varied lenghts.
No run on sentences
Interesting and varied sentence structures
Sentences are all complete, varied, and reflect writer understanding