Beats by Dre
97 pts
Earbuds by Apple
85 pts
Headphones by Coby
65 pts
Tin Cans by Del Monte
50 pts
To what extent does the intro feature an interesting, engaging lead that draws the reader to a powerful thesis (WRITING)
To what extent do you present a powerful, assertive, defensible thesis (WRITING)
To what extent do the body paragraphs feature rich, meaningful, well-organized, show-rather-than-tell details? (WRITING)
To what extent does the essay lead to a logical "so what?" conclusion that leaves the reader thinking? (WRITING)
To what extent does the paper feature an engaging, invested and consistent personality behind the writing (WRITING)
To what extent does the paper feature proper grammar, spelling, usage and such. (MUGS)
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