Mr. Burdick would probably hire a literary lawyer if he were still around!
2 pts
There may be a story in there somewhere, but not quite yet.
4 pts
Not bad! You show real talent as a writer--with the proper training in the craft.
6 pts
Harris Burdick would be pleased with the care and respect you have shown with his ideas.
8 pts
Story includes the illustration, the caption, character(s), setting, and plot.
Story is easy for the reader to follow, has a clear beginning and ending, and has a logical storyline.
Story is appealing, full of the unusual and unexpected, and natural to read.
The story has interesting words, strong imagery, and uses the language of mystery.
Story is easy to read aloud, has good phrasing, and varied sentence lengths.
Story has correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar.