I could use this as an example to others.
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This is what I expect to get from students
Not quite what I was hoping for
You missed this and should see me for help
The writer is telling the story from start to finish; Body gives specific description of experience. S
Hooks reader and introduces topic / story.
A conversation is used to move the story along and add to it.
Specifics verbs and adjectives add to the story
Experience should have meaning
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.