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You Make Me Sick! - 10
Extended Definition - 10
Rubric Code:
R3B699
By
MarkD6
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Subject:
English
Type:
Writing
Grade Levels:
9-12
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You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
9-10 pts.
(N/A)
Sentence Fluency
Not Yet
-Sentences are incomplete, choppy, rambling, or awkward.
-Sentences begin the same way.
Emerging
-Most of the sentences are complete and make sense.
-Many of the sentences begin the same way.
Developing
-Sentences get the job done in a routine fashion.
-Sentences are usually constructed correctly.
-Sentence beginnings are not ALL alike.
Effective
-Some variety in sentence structure and length.
-Reading provides some musical elements rather than just businesslike.
-A variety of beginnings, with little repetition.
Strong
-Sentences enhance the meaning.
-Sentences vary in length as well as structure.
-Purposeful and varied sentence beginnings.
You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
9-10 pts.
(N/A)
Word Choice
Not Yet
-The writer struggles with a limited vocabulary.
-Many of the words don't work.
-Limited vocabuluary, misuse of parts of speech.
Emerging
-Words and phrases are unimaginative and lifeless.
-Persistent redundancy.
-Full of jargons and cliches.
Developing
-The language is functional, even if it lacks much energy.
-Words are adequate and correct.
-Passive verbs, everyday nouns and modifiers.
Effective
-Attempts at colorful language
-Some fine moments shown with words
-The words show some refinement and precision.
Strong
-Words convey the intended message in a precise, interesting, and natural way.
-Striking words and phrases
-Lively verbs, specific nouns and modifiers
You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
9-10 pts.
(N/A)
Ideas
Not Yet
-The writer is still in search of a topic.
-Information is limited or unclear or the length is not adequate for development.
-The text contains too many random thoughts.
Emerging
-Everything seems as important as everything else.
-There is some development of the topic.
Developing
-Ideas are reasonably clear.
-The reader is left with questions.
-The writer generally stays on topic.
Effective
-Reasonably accurate details.
-Details enrich the central idea.
-The paper is clear and focused.
Strong
-Relevant quality details go beyond the obvious.
-Ideas are fresh and original.
-Reader's questions are anticipated and answered.
You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
9-10 pts.
(N/A)
Voice
Not Yet
-Lacks a point of view
-Purpose changes throughout the paper
-No persuasive ability shown
-Doesn't make any attempt to connect with the audience
Emerging
-Identity of writer is unclear
-Purpose is changing many times.
-Some attempts at persuasiveness
-Little connection with the audience
Developing
-Writer tries to be someone else.
-Purpose is sometimes unclear, doesn't choose one side
-Some persuasiveness shown
-Has some difficulty connecting with the audience
Effective
-Writer is usually speaking in an honest voice.
-Purpose is mostly clear throughout the paper.
-Persuasive ability shown at various times
-There is some connection with the audience.
Strong
-Writing is honest, personal, and engaging.
-Purpose is reflected by content and arrangement.
-Persuasiveness shows understanding of topic.
-Connects with the audience
You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
9-10 pts.
(N/A)
Organization
Not Yet
-No real introduction or conclusion
-No emotions or feelings are shown
-Sequencing needs work
-Problems with organization make it hard for the reader to get a grip on the point
Emerging
-Has intro or conclusion, but not both
-Few, if any emotions and feelings are shown
-Some sequence is evident
-A few signs of organization
Developing
-Has a recognizable intro and conclusion
-Some emotion and feelings are shown
-Sequencing shows some logic
-Organization sometimes supports the main point
Effective
-Intro and conclusion could use a little work
-Emotion and feelings are shown
-Sequencing is logical
-Organization mostly supports the main point.
Strong
-Intro is creative and conclusion leaves no questions
-Emotions and feelings are a vital part of the story
-Sequencing is logical
-Organization supports the main point
You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
9-10 pts.
(N/A)
Conventions
Not Yet
Too many errors to follow the story
Emerging
A significant amount of errors, shows little proofreading
Developing
A number of errors, some taking away from the story
Effective
Some errors, but nothing that distracts from the story
Strong
Few, if any errors
You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8-9 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
10 pts.
(N/A)
Presentation
Not Yet
-Spac ing is un even and wordsruntogether
-not the correct style or size font
-text is difficult to read because of placement on page
Emerging
-Have not double spaced
-Font is wrong style or wrong size
-Spacing after punctuation is wrong often
Developing
-Spacing is not always correct
-Font is not correct
Effective
-Only minor spacing issues
-Font and size are correct
Strong
-No errors in formatting
You Make Me Sick!
Not Yet
0-4 pts.
(N/A)
Emerging
5-6 pts.
(N/A)
Developing
7 pts.
(N/A)
Effective
8-9 pts.
(N/A)
Strong
10 pts.
(N/A)
Works Cited page
Not Yet
-Very poorly done
Emerging
-Many errors, shows little effort
Developing
-Noticeable errors
Effective
-Minor errors
Strong
-Everything done correctly.
Subjects:
English
Types:
Writing
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