I could use this as an example to others.
5 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
4 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
3 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
2 pts
Not present in narrative
1 pts
The writer is telling the story from start to finish; using science vocabulary to describe shadows.
Hooks reader and introduces story
A conversation is used to move the story along and add to it includes science vocabulary terms
Specifics verbs and adjectives add to the story show how shadow change over the course of a day.
Experience should have meaning reader understands connection.
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.