Show control and skill in this criteria; many strenghts present
4 pts
On balance, the strenghts outweigh the weaknesses; a small about of revision is needed
3 pts
Stenghts and need for revision are about equal; about half way home
2 pts
Ned for revision outweighs strengths; isolated moments hint at what the writer has in mind
1 pts
*Story has a lead with a hook that pulls the reader into the story * Lead contains setting and it makes sense to the story
* Character's struggle and motivation are the center of the plot * Events of the story are arranged chronologically * Transitations are used to connect events in the story
* Story ends in a creative way with a solution to the problem
* Traits are described thoughout the story using dialogue or description
*Used to move the story along *Sounds real and doesn't include unnecessary lines
* Spelling * Paragraphing * Punctuation
* Handwriting * Margins * Corrections