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Unwind essay 
Write a letter, in essay format, to The Committee persuading them that you should not be unwound. Provide three reasons that you should be kept alive and allowed to continue your life as it is now. Use examples from the novel to compare with, or support your personal, individual situation. Cite the textual evidence properly. This is not a simple task, it must include descriptions of your accomplishments, details of your reasoning and heartfelt emotional appeals to not be unwound.
Rubric Code: PXXBXWA
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Subject: English  
Type: Assessment  
Grade Levels: 6-8

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  Highly Proficient

10 pts

Proficient

8 pts

Partially Proficient

6 pts

Minimally Proficient

4 pts

Introductory paragraph

Highly Proficient

Clear, strong general statement
Strong thesis statement
Well written organization sentence.
Well written transition sentence.
Proficient

Clear general statement
Thesis statement
Organizational sentence
Transition sentence
Partially Proficient

Attempt at general statement
Attempt at thesis statement
Attempt at organizational sentence.
Attempt at transition sentence
Minimally Proficient

Minimal or missing following:

General statement
Thesis statement
Organizational sentence
Transition sentence
Body Paragraphs

Highly Proficient

Body paragraphs follow format with:
A strong topic sentence
Strong main ideas
Concrete details from text
Strong explanatory sentences
Concluding sentence
Transition sentence
Proper citations in all body paragraphs
Proficient

Body paragraphs attempt to follow format. May be missing:
Topic sentence
Main idea sentence
Concrete details
Explanatory sentences
Concluding sentence
Transition sentence
Proper citations in 2 body paragraphs
Partially Proficient

Minimal attempt is made at following paragraph format
Minimally Proficient

No clear attempt is made to follow format, or body paragraphs are missing.
Content

Highly Proficient

Completely addresses the prompt. Persuasive reasons are highly relevant with supporting details, textual evidence and explanatory comments.
Highly persuasive to not being unwound
Proficient

Somewhat addresses the prompt. Persuasive reasons are relevant with supporting details, textual evidence and explanatory comments.
Somewhat persuasive to not being unwound.
Partially Proficient

Attempts to address the prompt. Some information is not relevant. Minimal explanatory comments.

You may be unwound
Minimally Proficient

No clear attempt is made to address the prompt.

Likely to be unwound
Concluding paragraph

Highly Proficient

Strong concluding paragraph, with a strong topic sentence, body paragraph summaries, restates the thesis and provides a clear, strong final statement.
Proficient

Concluding paragraph, with a topic sentence, body paragraph summaries, restates the thesis and provides clear final statement
Partially Proficient

Attempt at a conclusion, may not include:
Topic sentence
Body paragraph summaries
Restate the thesis.
Final statement
Minimally Proficient

Minimal or no relevant attempt at a conclusion.
Conventions

Highly Proficient

Minimal to no errors in spelling, capitalization, grammar and punctuation.

(1-4 errors)
Proficient

Some errors in spelling, capitalization, grammar and punctuation, but does not affect readability and/or content.

(5-9 errors)
Partially Proficient

Errors in spelling, capitalization, grammar and punctuation that affect readability and/or content.

(10 or more errors)
Minimally Proficient

Assignment not completed.




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