I could use this as an example to others.
6 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
5 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
4 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
2 pts
Not present in narrative
1 pts
The writer is telling the story from start to finish; Body gives specific description of experience building electromagnet
Hooks reader and introduces story
A conversation is used to move the story along and apply what he/she has learned in science class.
Specifics add to the story using science vocabulary terms to enhance the story
Experience should have meaning and tell audience how an electromagnet works.
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.