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Character Develpment Paper (Cause & Effect) 
Rubric Code: N49B55
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Subject: English  
Type: Writing  
Grade Levels: 9-12

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  Excellent

5 pts

Good / Above Average

4 pts

Fair / Average

3 pts

Below Average / Needs Improvement

2 pts

Poor / Insufficient

1 pts

Submission Requirements
0 pts

Submission: Hard Copy or by Email .

Along with submission to www.turnitin.com

Excellent

Submitted hard copy or submitted paper by email to the instructor on the assigned date. Along with online submission to turnitin.com
Good / Above Average

One class day late.
Fair / Average

One to two class days late.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

Three or four days late.
Poor / Insufficient

Late papers submitted over one week late will not be accepted.
Format & Length
10 pts

Excellent

The writer followed MLA format, included an original title, and met length requirement of 3-4 pages typed.
(12pt. font, double space)

Source information is quoted, summarized, or paraphrased, and the information is cited using proper parenthetical (in-text)citation.
Good / Above Average

The writer mostly followed MLA format, included an original title, and met length requirement of 3-4 pages typed.
(12pt. font, double space)

All of the evidence provided is quoted, summarized, or paraphrased, and the information is cited using proper parenthetical (in-text)citation.
Fair / Average

The writer followed some of the format requirements for MLA format, original title and may have nearly missed length requirement of 3-4 pages typed.
(12pt. font, double space)

Some of the evidence provided may not be acurately quoted, summarized, or paraphrased, and the information may not be properly cited.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

The writer did not follow most of the format requirements for MLA format, original title and clearly did not meet the length requirement of 3-4 pages typed.
(12pt. font, double space)

Evidence is not acturately quoted, summarized, or paraphrased, and information may not be cited properly.
Poor / Insufficient

The writer did not follow MLA format, title, and length requirements.

Most if not all citatations are inacruate or omitted.
Introduction
10 pts

Attention Grabber/Hook
Background Info/Bridge
Thesis Statement

(Hooks: Quote, Vivid Description, or Sent. Fragment)

Excellent

The introduction contains a strong attention-grabbing opening statement(s) (hook), provides sufficient background information (bridge), and includes a thesis statement.
Good / Above Average

The introduction contains a sufficient attention-grabbing opening statement (hook), and the background information is sufficiently presented (bridge).

There is a thesis statement present.
Fair / Average

The introduction makes an attempt at an attention-grabbing opening statement although it may not be effective (hook), and/or the background information is only partially presented (bridge).

Thesis statement may be implied or vague.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

The introduction is not clearly presented in the essay. May be missing the attention grabber (hook) or background information (bridge).

Thesis statement may be missing or very confusing to the reader.
Poor / Insufficient

The introduction is insufficient and does not provide attention grabber (hook) and missing background information (bridge).

Thesis statement is not present or insufficient.
Thesis Statement
10 pts

Excellent

The thesis statement clearly identifies the topic of the essay and outlines the main points to be discussed.

The thesis statement is placed correctly.
Good / Above Average

The thesis statement is presented, but may not clearly identify the topic of the essay and/or may not preview the main points to be discussed.

Thesis statement is placed correctly.
Fair / Average

The thesis statement is implied or vague in how it presents the topic of the essay, and/or may only partially outline the main points to be discussed.

The thesis statement may not be placed correctly.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

The thesis statement is insufficient in presenting the topic of the essay, and it does not contain preview of the main points to be discussed.

The thesis statement may not be placed correctly.
Poor / Insufficient

The thesis statement is not clear, or one was not included.
Organization and Transitions
10 pts

Excellent

Over and above the expected amount of detail and is clearly placed in a logical order and the way they are presented effectively keeps the interest of the reader.

The essay includes 5-6 distinct paragraphs: Introduction, 3-4 body paragraphs, and conclusion.

A variety of thoughtful transitions are used. They clearly show how the ideas are connected.
Good / Above Average

Details are placed in a logical order and the way they are presented effectively keeps the interest of the reader.

The essay includes 5-6 paragraphs: Introduction, 3-4 body paragraphs, and conclusion.

Transitions between paragraphs are used.
Fair / Average

Some details may not be in a logical order or expected order, and this distracts the reader.

The essay includes 5-6 paragraphs: Introduction, 3-4 body paragraphs, and conclusion; however, they may not be clearly presented.

Most transitions work well; but connections between other ideas are unclear.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

Many details are not in a logical order or expected order. There is little sense that the writing is organized and/or the essay does not include 5-6 paragraphs.

Some transitions work well; but connections between other ideas are unclear or nonexistant.
Poor / Insufficient

Most of the details are not in a logical or expected order. The writing is clearly not well organized and/or thought out.

The essay does not include 5-6 paragraphs: Introduction, 3-4 body paragraphs, and conclusion.

The transitions between ideas are unclear or nonexistant.
Topic Sentences
10 pts

Excellent

Topic sentences are clearly presented and accurately follow the order outlined by the thesis statement
Good / Above Average

Many topic sentences are clearly presented and accurately follow the order outlined by the thesis statement
Fair / Average

Some topic sentences are recognizable, but one sentence is out of place or needs to closely align with the thesis.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

Few topic sentences are apparent, but at least two sentences need to closely align with the thesis.
Poor / Insufficient

The essay does not contain any apparent topic sentences.
Body: Cause-Effect
20 pts

(Connections)

Excellent

Includes 2 or more clear and insightful reasons for the cause/effect relationship which are logical and clarify the relationship for the audience.

The writer's individual interpretations are sophisticated and insightful. The writer has taken the ideas and made them "his/her own."
Good / Above Average

Includes 2 logical reasons for the cause/effect relationship for the audience.

The writer's individual interpretations are present. The ideas are insightful and the writer has taken the ideas and made them "his/her own."
Fair / Average

Includes 2 cause/effect relationships, may lack clarity or may only partially illustrate the relationship for the audience. Reasons provided for the relationship may overlap or may basic.

The writer's interpretation of the cause/effect relationship is basic and lacks complexity, although connection may be logical.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

May only include 1-2 reasons for the cause/effect relationship, lacks clarity and relationship is underdeveloped or illogical.

The writer adds nothing to the discussion of the topic and interpretation is superficial and sophisication. May be illogical or unreasonable.
Poor / Insufficient

Includes 1-2 reasons which are illogical or cause and effect relationship not evident.

The writer has not tried to transform the information in a personal way.
Support for the Topic
20 pts

(Content)

Excellent

At least 3 pieces of specific, complex, and thoroughly examined evidence are used in each of the body paragraphs. Evidence is quoted, summarized, or paraphrased, and clearly supports the writer's thesis statement.
Good / Above Average

At least 2-3 pieces of specific evidence that is properly analyzed is provided in each of the body paragraphs. Evidence is quoted, summarized, or paraphrased, and supports the writer's thesis statement.
Fair / Average

At least 2 pieces of evidence are included in each of the body paragraphs, but is not thoroughly explained or examined. Evidence may not be specific and/or does not support the writer's thesis statement.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

Writer does may not include the required amount of textual evidence in each of the body paragraphs. The evidence is not specific; it is simple and not fully explored. Evidence does not support the writer's thesis statement.
Poor / Insufficient

Writer does not include any textual evidence, or there may be too much evidence and not enough of the writer's supporting statements and/or evidence in the essay.
Conclusion
10 pts

Excellent
Good / Above Average

The conclusion is effective. It restates the thesis that may or may not be reworded. It provides a sufficient closing sentence that attempts to leave the reader with something to think about. (So what?)
Fair / Average

The conclusion is basic and may only be somewhat effective. It may lack a restated thesis or a closing sentence that leaves the reader with something to think about. (So what?)
Below Average / Needs Improvement

There was a very simple or ineffective conclusion presented. It is missing more than one of the elements necessary for a concluding paragarph.
Poor / Insufficient

There was no clear conclusion. It lacked all of the components necessary in a conclusion paragraph.
Grammar & Spelling
0 pts

(Grammar, Spelling, Mechanics, and Word Choice)

Excellent

The writer makes a few or no errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
Good / Above Average

The writer makes some errors in grammar and spelling that distract the reader from the content.
Fair / Average

The writer makes many errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content.
Below Average / Needs Improvement

The writer is consistently making too many errors in grammar and spelling that causes the reader to be unable to comprehend the content of the paper.
Poor / Insufficient




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