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iRubric: Voice and Personality rubric

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Voice and Personality Creative Writing second period agrees upon the following qualifications of voice and tone. Rubric Code: N23832 By Titania24G Draft Public Rubric Subject: English Type: Writing Grade Levels: 9-12

Voice
	Zucchini Soy Paste 1 pts	Plain Old Vanilla 2.5 pts	Double Fudge Sunday!! 4 pts
Emotion	Zucchini Soy Paste Not expressive, lack of emotion, emotion is forced, attempting to sound emotional, a little immature	Plain Old Vanilla Some emotion, but parts sound superficial and fake, attempt to communicate how you feel but missed the mark, cliche, average, nothing new, typical	Double Fudge Sunday!! Balance of expression, relief for the audience, sense of passion, audience can relate and "feel."
Word Choice	Zucchini Soy Paste Unnatural/inappropriate vocabulary, too many long words, too much exageration, lack of adjectives (only a bunch of dumb nouns),	Plain Old Vanilla Mundane, childish, there without extraordinary description, no similies or metaphors, cliche	Double Fudge Sunday!! Good adjectives, contribute to the piece, not too many adjectives, use of precise words, variety, originality,
Comprehension/ Train of Thought	Zucchini Soy Paste Confuse audience, no clear descriptions, lack of plot flow, transitions, random train of though	Plain Old Vanilla Audience understand the general plot but their attention isn't captured	Double Fudge Sunday!! Audience is considered, entertained, and can grasp the full story, fluid, goes together
Sensory Detail	Zucchini Soy Paste Nobody can relate to the feeling, leaves the audience wondering	Plain Old Vanilla Cliche, there is evidence of an attempt but no "wow" factor.	Double Fudge Sunday!! puts a picture in your head, easy to imagine, aids your imagination in creating that sensation
Strengths	Zucchini Soy Paste Trying to force an effect	Plain Old Vanilla Some knowledge of your strengths, but you can't carry through	Double Fudge Sunday!! Knowing your strengths (humor, imagery, dialogue), it sounds natural