I could use this as an example to others.
3 pts
This is what I expect to get from students
2 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for
1 pts
You missed this and should see me for help
0 pts
The writer is telling the story from start to finish; Body gives specific description of experience
Hooks reader, introduces story, contains a thesis
Specifics verbs and adjectives add to the story
Experience should have meaning
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.
Writing Process Documents
MLA/Formatting