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*Presents a vivid picture of the person's appearance and personality. * Includes dialogue, mannerisms or other devices to show what the person is like. * Provides a view of the person's natural surroundings. *Contains the writer's response to the person.
The details about the person support a single main impression.
Writing has a clear, strong introduction.
Correct punctuation, spelling, and grammar are evident.