This paragraph needs a lot of work and is either a near failing paragraph or a paragraph that needs to be entirely redesigned/reorganized and rewritten.
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This is a paragraph that is working for the most part, but still reads more like an incomplete and/or nonproofread draft.
This paragraph succeeds in reading like a strong final draft This paragraph has been edited, stylized, and completed with an awareness of the assignment, purpose, and audience.