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Revising a Personal Narrative about Choice.
Revising a Personal Narrative about Choice.
Rubric Code:
F45B59
By
jolynnhill
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Subject:
English
Type:
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Grade Levels:
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Revision of a Personal Narrative
100 %
Students will write a personal narrative and revise using a revision plan.
Exemplary
100 pts
Proficient
85 pts
Emerging
70 pts
Ideas
25 %
Exemplary
The narrative responds to the prompt skillfully by:
-effectively describing the choice
-clearly explaining the consequences of the decision made
-thoroughly reflecting on the lesson learne.d
Proficient
The narrative responds to the prompt by:
-describing the choice
-explaining the consequences of the decision made
-reflecting on the lesson learned.
Emerging
The text does no show an adequate response to the prompt.
Organization
25 %
Exemplary
The author effectively revises the organizational structure of the narrative to include:
-an engaging beginning that hooks the reader and effectively reveals all aspects of the incident
-a middle that vividly describes the series of events leading to the incident as well as the narrator's feelings, thoughts, and actions
-a reflective ending that examines the consequences of the choice.
Proficient
The author revises the organizational structure of the narrative to include:
-a beginning that introduces the incident
-a middle that adequately describes of the narrator's feelings, thoughts and actions
-an ending that examines the consequences of the choice.
Emerging
The autho'rs text refelcts very little revision to first draft's organizational structure. If present, the draft may or may not include the following:
-a beginning with an unfocused hook
-a middle that is not descriptive or merely tells the series of events leading to the incident
-an ending with minimal reflection and closure.
Use of Language
15 %
Exemplary
The narrative effectively uses sensory images and details to vividly "show" the incident.
Proficient
The narrative usues sensory images and details to make the incident clear.
Emerging
The narrative does not use
sensory images and details
to make the incident clear.
Conventions
10 %
Exemplary
Writing contains few or no errors in spelling, punctuation, or capitalization.
Proficient
Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes do not detract from the
narrative.
Emerging
Spelling, punctuation, or capitalization mistakes detract from meaning and/
or readability.
Revision and reflection plan
25 %
Exemplary
The author outlines and
implements a thorough
revision plan.
The author revises the
text by making significant
revisions that improve the
meaning, clarity, and the
style of the narrative.
The reflection includes
several thoughtful reasons
and explanations for the
changes made.
Proficient
The author outlines and
implements an appropriate
revision plan.
The author revises the text
by making revisions that
bring clarity to the narrative
for the reader.
The reflection includes
reasons for the changes
made.
Emerging
The author does not outline
or implement a plan for
revision.
The reflection is minimal
and/or unclear.
Subjects:
English
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