iRubric: Revising a Personal Narrative about Choice. rubric

The author effectively revises the organizational structure of the narrative to include:
-an engaging beginning that hooks the reader and effectively reveals all aspects of the incident
-a middle that vividly describes the series of events leading to the incident as well as the narrator's feelings, thoughts, and actions
-a reflective ending that examines the consequences of the choice.

The author revises the organizational structure of the narrative to include:
-a beginning that introduces the incident
-a middle that adequately describes of the narrator's feelings, thoughts and actions
-an ending that examines the consequences of the choice.

The autho'rs text refelcts very little revision to first draft's organizational structure. If present, the draft may or may not include the following:
-a beginning with an unfocused hook
-a middle that is not descriptive or merely tells the series of events leading to the incident
-an ending with minimal reflection and closure.

Writing contains few or no errors in spelling, punctuation, or capitalization.

Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization mistakes do not detract from the
narrative.

Spelling, punctuation, or capitalization mistakes detract from meaning and/
or readability.