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Sadako & 1000 Paper Cranes & Defiance - combined 
Writing For a New Ending to the Story
How would you change the ending and combine both Sadako and the 1000 paper Cranes (1950s Japan) with the book Defiance (modern USA) to create a story ending that incorporates all the characters with a Christian theme?
Rubric Code: F24B7W6
By capoche
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Subject: English  
Type: Writing  
Grade Levels: 6-8

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  Excellent

5 pts

Good

4 pts

Fair

3 pts

Poor

0 pts

Content: Ending combines stories creatively

Excellent

Content is well organized.
It includes characters, events, plot, problem, solution and setting. The ending was extremely well thought out. At least several good paragraphs. Combining 1950s Sadako & the Paper Cranes with Defiance (modern USA).
Good

Ending is generally logical and includes characters, events, plot, problem, solution and setting. The ending was thought out. More than a good paragraph or two long. .
Fair

Ending is somewhat illogical and confusing. A good solid paragraph. The ending is ok.
Poor

Poorly organized. The ending is a paragraph or less long. Ending in no way fits the story.
Editing for ALL Conventions

Excellent

Writer uses correct capitalization, grammar, word order, spelling and punctuation throughout the whole narrative. Totally legible, staying on lines, spacing properly either printed or handwritten. Title centered on first line (NOT floating in air). Writer fulfills the requirements of the assignment and has put care and effort into the process.
Good

Writer usually uses correct grammar, word order, spelling and punctuation for most of the narrative. Fairly neat. Writer fulfills all of the requirements of the assignment.
Fair

Writer makes frequent mistakes with grammar, word order, spelling and punctuation. Can read most of it. Writer fulfills some of the requirements of the assignment.
Poor

Writer consistently makes errors with grammar, word order, spelling and punctuation. Not their good, final copy. Assignment is incomplete
Adding "Sparkle"

Excellent

All small basic adjectives and adverbs have been exchanged for "sparkle words" from a thesaurus (book or online) or the classroom chart (interesting words for basic words such as massive and humongous for big, or gorgeous for pretty, etcetera)
Good

Pretty good use of "sparkle words" (adjectives and adverbs), mostly using them correctly.
Fair

A lot of mis-use of adjectives and adverbs or very little effort and few words are upgraded.
Poor

Assignment is incomplete.
Having all Characters Become Christians

Excellent

Utilize creativity to have characters become followers of Christ in a way that makes sense and is creatively interjected.
Good

Have characters become followers of Christ in a way that makes sense and is creatively interjected.
Fair

Have characters become followers of Christ .
Poor

Oops...missed a VERY important step!



Keywords:
  • Christian, Children and Cancer, Story Combination, New story Ending, International



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