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Does the introduction effectively begin essay, include a thesis and provide a preview of the main points?
Does each detail support the topic, and are there sentences followed by additional support (Say Mores)?
Does the order of the supporting details make sense?
Do linking words, or transition words, connect details so that the paragraph reads smoothly?
Does each point have good elaboration using anecdotes from the biography?
Does the conclusion restate the topic in a new way to tie the details together?
Does the paper indicate that the writer has control of the rules of spelling, grammar and mechanics
Essay should be 300-500 words