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"Baseball Giants" Comparison and Contrast Essay 
Guidelines for scoring a comparison and contrast essay, based on articles about two famous baseball players.
Rubric Code: E93B75
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Subject: English  
Type: Writing  
Grade Levels: 6-8, 9-12

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  Not attempted

0 pts

Poor

1 pts

Fair

2 pts

Good

3 pts

Excellent

4 pts

Title

Does the reader know the two things that you will be comparing and contrasting?

Not attempted

There is no title.
Poor

Title is unclear.
Fair

Title is too broad for the essay topic.
Good

Title is clear, not well-written, or simple.
Excellent

Title is clear and creative.
Introduction

Is the reader briefly told about the two things you will be comparing and contrasting? This should be the topic sentence.

Not attempted

There is no introduction.
Poor

Introduction contains:
* 1 sentence
*the two things being compared are not clearly stated
Fair

Introduction contains:
* 1 sentence
*the two things being compared are somewhat clearly stated
Good

Introduction contains:
*2 sentences
* the two things being compared are stated, though not to the level of excellence
Excellent

Introduction contains:
*at least 3 sentences
*the two things being compared are clearly stated
Comparison/Contrast

Are sufficient examples of BOTH comparison and contrast present and are they appropriate for the paper?

Not attempted

There are no comparisons.
Poor

Points of comparison are not useful or sufficient, and they are inconsistently developed.
Fair

Some points of comparison are useful and sufficient, and are somewhat developed.
Good

Most points of comparison are useful and sufficient, and are mostly developed.
Excellent

All points of comparison are:
*useful and sufficient *consistently developed, either point-by-point, or subject-by-subject
Conclusion

Is the topic sentence restated? Is closure brought to the reader by summing up main points and offering a final perspective on the topics?

Not attempted

There is no conclusion.
Poor

Conclusion contains:
*1 sentence
*the topic sentence is not clearly restated
*No closure is brought to the reader by summing up main points
Fair

Conclusion contains:
*1 sentence
*the topic sentence is not clearly restated
*little closure is brought to the reader by summing up main points
Good

Conclusion contains:
*2 sentences
*the topic sentence is somewhat clearly restated
*Some closure is brought to the reader by summing up main points
Excellent

Conclusion contains:
*at least 3 sentences *the topic sentence is clearly restated
*closure is brought to the reader by summing up main points
Transitions

Did you use a variety of "signal words" to organize the ideas in your paragraphs? Are transitions provided where needed but not overused?

Not attempted

There are no transitions.
Poor

Transitions are present but do not effectively direct readers from one example to the next. They may be basic and/or confusing.
Fair

Transitions are present but only a few effectively direct readers from one example to the next. They may be basic and/or confusing.
Good

Transitions are present and direct readers from point to point, though not to the level of excellence.
Excellent

Transitions are:
*present and effectively direct readers from point to point.
* exhibit sophisti-cation on the part of the writer. *transitional phrases depict either comparison or contrast effectively.
Grammar/ Mechanics and Spelling

Does paper indicate that writer has control of the rules of grammar and mechanics?

Not attempted

Essay contains 9 or more errors that completely distract the reader from comprehending the essay.
Poor

Essay contains 9 or more errors, some of which are distracting to the reader.
Fair

Essay contains 6-8 errors, which obstruct the flow of reading.
Good

Essay contains 3-5 errors, but they are not distracting to the reader.
Excellent

Essay contains 1 or 2 errors.




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