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Cautionary Tale : Rewriting a Mistake 
Think about how Cole learns to regret his actions in the SECOND half of Touching Spirit Bear (TSB). He realizes that his actions were his responsibility and that his mistakes hurt himself, others that he physically or directly injured (Peter, the Spirit Bear, people he lies to, etc.) and those who try to help him (Edwin, his mother, Garvey, Rose, etc.) Now think about a time when you acted out, hurt someone, did or said something disrespectful, or did something you feel was wrong and would like to go back and change. Choose one of those mistakes or regrets and create a "cautionary tale" to help yourself avoid making the same mistake. How would you warn yourself or stop yourself from making the same mistake if you went back in time? You can also think about how you would stop yourself from acting destructively (negatively /wrongly) if you faced with a similar situation now. Use the Brainstorm and Checklist assignments to help you complete the assignment.
Rubric Code: E684XC
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Subject: English  
Type: Reading  
Grade Levels: 6-8

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  Excellent

4 pts

Strong

3 pts

Work Could Improve

2 pts

Something Is Missing

1 pts

Main Idea, Theme, Cause and Effect

Excellent

Main/Topic idea is clear. There is a clear theme that follows a cautionary tale story. I.E. The story explains the mistake made, the regret, the advice given, whether or not the character changes and if there is a consequence or punishment.
Strong

Main/Topic idea is somewhat clear. There is a generally clear theme that follows a cautionary tale style.

At least 3 of the 5 following are present and clear:

the explanation of the mistake, the regret and advice the advice given, whether or not the character changes and if there is a consequence or punishment.
Work Could Improve

Main/Topic idea is not really clear. There is an unclear theme that follows a cautionary tale style.

3 of the 5 following are present but are not clear or explained : the explanation of the mistake, the regret and advice the advice given, whether or not the character changes and if there is a consequence or punishment.

OR 2 of the above are clear and well-explained.
Something Is Missing

Main/Topic idea is not present at all. There is no clear theme that follows a a cautionary tale style.
Character

Excellent

There is a clear, well-thought out and described main character (the student as part of the cautionary tale) or a cast of more than one character, whose mistakes, regrets and developments are clear.
Strong

There is a well described main character or cast of characters, but they do not fit with the cautionary tale style and seem random or thrown in.

OR

The main character or cast of characters fit the story, but they are not well-described or "fleshed-out."
Work Could Improve

There is a character included / featured in the story, but only by name.

OR

The character is mentioned only once.
Something Is Missing

There is no character included at all.
There is logical order to the story

Excellent

Well ordered sentences (beginning, middle, and end) that keep to the topic / subject.
Strong

Sentences keep to the topic, but the order is weak.
Work Could Improve

Some parts do not keep to the topic.
Something Is Missing

Topic and story are confusing for the reader and the order seems random and not well thought out.
Details

Excellent

Thoughtful details make the reader "picture" the scene and empathize with the main character (feel what the character is feeling). You want your reader to be able to see things from the main character's Point of view.

The reader can imagine what is going on and we "see" the story in our heads like a movie.
Strong

Some details help the reader understand what is going on.
Work Could Improve

Not enough details to help the reader understand the story.
Something Is Missing

No supporting details are used at all.
Spelling, Grammar, and Illustration

Excellent

Spelling, grammar, and punctuation are correct,
Presentation is neat and well illustrated.

*Illustration can be drawn, magazine clipping, staged photo, collage, pictures taken from online, or designed / drawn on the computer.
Strong

Spelling, grammar, and punctuation are mostly correct,
Presentation is neat and well illustrated.

*Illustration can be drawn, magazine clipping, staged photo, collage, pictures taken from online, or designed / drawn on the computer.
Work Could Improve

Spelling, grammar, and punctuation contain many errors. Presentation is somewhat neat and poorly illustrated.

*Illustration can be drawn, magazine clipping, staged photo, collage, pictures taken from online, or designed / drawn on the computer.
Something Is Missing

Spelling, grammar, and punctuation contain many errors. Presentation is very disorderly (very sloppy) or not at all illustrated.

*Illustration can be drawn, magazine clipping, staged photo, collage, pictures taken from online, or designed / drawn on the computer.



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