I could use this as an example to others.
4 pts
This is what I expect to get from students.
3 pts
Not quite what I was hoping for.
2 pts
You missed this and should see me for help.
1 pts
The narrative addresses the prompt.
The writer is telling the story from start to finish; Body gives specific description of experience. S
Hooks reader and introduces topic / story.
Specifics verbs and adjectives add to the story
Experience should have meaning
Spelling, punctuating dialogue, and basic sentence formatting.