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Personal Response Essay; QHS 
5 paragraph essay rubric
Rubric Code: D84B9
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Subject: English  
Type: Writing  
Grade Levels: 9-12

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  Below Basic 1

1 pts

Basic 2

2 pts

Proficient 3

3 pts

ADVANCED 4

4 pts

Points

(N/A)

Introduction

Below Basic 1

Introduction does not introduce topic.
Basic 2

Introduction attempts to introduce topic. Following points are not obvious.
Proficient 3

Introduction introduces topic but does not make clarify main points.
ADVANCED 4

Introduction is concise and opening catches the reader's attention.
Points
Thesis Statement

Below Basic 1

No evidence of a thesis statement: student provides a number of related points.
Basic 2

There is some evidence of a thesis statement, but it is not clear. Thesis does not relate to rest of essay.
Proficient 3

Thesis statement is somewhat clear, but could be worded better. Relates somewhat to rest of essay.
ADVANCED 4

Thesis statement is stated clearly. The student's position is clear and easy to follow.
Points
Supporting Points and Details

Below Basic 1

A thesis statement may be evident. No supporting points or details are provided.
Basic 2

There may be one or two supporting points: details are inadequate.
Proficient 3

There are supporting points, though some may be missing. Details are included, but may not fully support points.
ADVANCED 4

Student uses points which support thesis statement. There are details which support the points.
Points
Conclusion

Below Basic 1

No conclusion is apparent in the essay.
Basic 2

Conclusion may be attempted, but does not summarize or restate thesis.
Proficient 3

Conclusion provides a summary of supporting points: it is wordy and does not restate the thesis.
ADVANCED 4

Conclusion is concise and summarizes supporting points: restates the thesis in a new way.
Points
Mechanics

Below Basic 1

Errors are glaring and the essay is difficult to read.
Basic 2

There are several errors which detract from the overall meaning and flow of the essay.
Proficient 3

Minimal errors are found (2-4). They do not detract from the general flow of the essay.
ADVANCED 4

Errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization are minimal and not distracting. (0-2).
Points
Flow/Transitions

Below Basic 1

No flow to writing. Argument is difficult to follow. No transitions used.
Basic 2

Sentences are short or run-ons. Flow of essay is hard to follow. Little to no transitions used.
Proficient 3

Vocabulary or writing style needs further development. Some basic transitions used.
ADVANCED 4

Writing has voice and flows easily. Appropriate transitions used.
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