Extra time and effort is needed
1 pts
The paragraph needs to follow the "hamburger model" better.
2 pts
Well-written and focused for the most part
3 pts
Well-written, focused, and fantastic paragraph
4 pts
Did you add a strong title ?
Do you engage the reader and describe the topic with clarity? The WHAT question is answered.
Did you use FACTS/REASONS and examples from the text to support your main idea? The who, when , where , why, and how questions are answered?
How can you summarize everything you said in your paragraph(s)? The topic is restated in an engaging manner.